Comments on Annotated Bibliography

    What was the most helpful piece of advice you received? Explain.

    

     I think the comments about the whole paragraphs were the most helpful because I felt like they needed to be revised but wasn't sure what to do to revise them. The comments will help me with how I will actually get to revising them.

    

    What was the least helpful piece of advice you received? Explain.

    

     When she told me not to use books over 10 years old, I wrote that in as one of the problems with that source. It was hard to find any books at all on the Finland education system. I think that this book still has valuable information on the history of the system which is what I used it for.

    What questions do you have about Megan’s comments?

    

     I have a question about when she told me I was contradicting in my last source. I might have tunnel vision and needs to be explained how it was contradictory to me. Other then that I think all of the comments were very good. 

    What are your plans for revision?  Be specific.  I should be able to understand exactly how your work will change in exactly which places.

     I plan to delete the paragraph as a whole in the first source that got confusing. I will change all the little things that are easy to fix through out too. I will add some information to the White House and the written source on credibility too.