Sunday, March 31, 2013

2nd Draft: Annotated Bibliography


Randolph, Kelli, and Dylinda Wilson-Younger. "Is No Child Left Behind Effective For All Students?" Parents Don't Think So." Online Submission (2012): ERIC. Web. 24 Mar. 2013.

            In this article, the authors describe the pros and cons to the No Child Left Behind Act implemented by the Bush Administration in 2001. I plan on using the information to show government intervention in education in America, and then compare it to Finland. The first fact the article gives is how the “NCLB requires any schools receiving any types of federal funding to administer some type of standardized test to their students every year” (Randolph 1). The purpose of this is to measure the success of the students and the school as a whole, and to make sure the schools are staying on task by meeting the requirements set by the state. The hope of this program was is to have all students scoring proficiently by the 2013 – 2014 year. How close are we to reaching this goal? Have we made any progress at all with this program? If the schools don’t meet the AYP (adequate yearly progress) two years in a row they are labeled “in need of improvement.” When this happens they are provided technical assistance, parents may choose to send their students to a new school and the school must come up with a plan for improvement over the next two years. If it declines for three years, the school must provide free tutoring and education services to the students. How hard are these goals, and how do they vary from state to state? How often does a school need this?
“The NCLB has been praised, but mostly criticized. Many parents have praised the NCLB, because it allowed them to get their children out of failing schools and move them to better ones” (Randolph 2).  The NCLB Act has also provided resources such as computers to the classroom and improved test scores in multiple schools. What is the technology in the classrooms like in Finland? The bad parts of the NCLB Act include schools arguing that the goals set forth by the states are unattainable and the proper funding is not available either. “In an effort to improve test scores, many states have cut out their arts programs and in some cases have cut “nonessential” subjects such as social studies, foreign language, health, and science” (Randolph 3). How many of these classes does Finland provide? “President Obama along with the Secretary of Education also initiated “Race to the Top” as a part of the American Recovery and Reinvestment Act” (Randolph 4). The article did not talk much about this, but it could be something I can use in my paper as a future outlook in America.
This source is credible because of the authors and the nature of the statistics given. A PHD wrote it with the help of a colleague. It was published in 2012, which makes it very relevant. It showed both sides of the argument very well and did not favor one side. At the end it has a works cited page. The page includes government documents and other published articles. 
I plan on using this article to show how the U.S. system has been in the past decade and before. I can use this in the government intervention section of my final research paper. It has been revised since it was implemented with the American Recovery and Reinvestment Act by the Obama administration. I will need to find an article or two about the new Act in place.


Sahlberg, Pasi. "Lessons From Finland: Where The Country's Education System Rose To The Top In Just A Couple Decades." Education Digest: Essential Readings Condensed For Quick Review 77.3 (2011): 18-24. ERIC. Web. 24 Mar. 2013.

This article from the Education Digest is about the Finnish educational system. It gives most of the success to the teachers and the process they have to go through to be teachers, but there are other factors mentioned as well. “Today, three of five young Finns enroll in and 50% complete state-funded higher education after upper secondary school” (Pasi 1). How does this compare to the U.S.? One interesting thing stated throughout the article was how the Finnish system does not employ external standardized testing to drive the performance of schools or to inspect the schools and teachers. This is the opposite of how the American system works. The Finns devote lots of attention to personalized learning and creativity. “The progress of each student is judged more against his or her individual development and abilities are seen as a responsibility of the school, not external assessors” (Pasi 8). This is also the opposite of America. The Finland system uses personal judgment rather than statistical indicators.
“Teaching is consistently the most admired profession in opinion polls of high school graduates” (Pasi 2). Teaching is a hard profession to pursue though, suggests the article; “5,000 prospective teachers are selected from about 20,000 applicants” (Pasi 2). After the selection process, the hard part still has yet to come. “All teachers in Finnish primary, middle and high schools must hold a masters degree; preschool and kindergarten teachers must hold a bachelor’s degree” (Pasi 3). These are very high expectations to hold, and are not matched by most American teachers. It takes five to seven years for a teacher to complete their master’s degree. Once the teacher obtains their degree and position, it is usually a lifetime job; “an official estimate suggests that only 10% - 15% of teachers leave the profession during the course of their career” (Pasi 6). How does this compare to the U.S. expectancy of a teacher’s time in their position?
The credibility of this source is very good. It is from a known magazine called the Education Digest. It is from a series called the Essential Readings Condensed for Review. The study was done well with many facts about teachers and how they get to the positions they are at. It does not show preference, only facts.
I plan on using this in my paper as one of my main sources. I will use it in the section where I write about teachers in the various educational systems. There is an abundance of quotes in this paper to incorporate into the final research paper.

             Gokce, Asiye Toker, and Cevat Celep. "A Comparison Of Educational Systems Of Turkey, Malta, Ireland, Spain, Sweden, Portugal, Finland, Greece, Belgium, The Netherlands And Denmark." Online Submission (2011): ERIC. Web. 24 Mar. 2013.
           
This article compares the differences between Finland and other European countries. It gives a better understanding of the Finnish system from beginning to end in respect to economic, social and educational boundaries. In Finland, 57% for primary and secondary education is from the government while 43% is from municipalities. What is the rate in America? In Finland students enter compulsory education at the age of seven. When they enter compulsory education the goal is to “teach children to carry a sense of responsibility, independence, creativity, peaceful relations with people and be compatible relationship with Finnish society, and to set a good relationship between school and parents” (Asiye Toker 6). Another interesting fact pointed out about Finland is how close enrolment in private school is to public school. It is about 60% enrolment for public school and 40% for private school according to the graph on page 7. How similar are private and public schools in Finland?  “Once graduating the students will have a chance for registering to any school they want. Passing a skill exam is necessary for some vocational schools entrance” (Asiye Toker 8). 
            The starting and completing age for Finland is 16 and 19 for upper secondary education according to the graph on page 8. This is older than the U.S. system. “While universities highlight scientific research and instruction, technical schools emphasize “practice” in their strategic plans in Finland” (Asiye Toker 10). This seems similar to the U.S. The main focus of the Finnish university system is to provide conditions for free and autonomous studying. How hard are these schools to get into though? What is the application process like for universities in Finland? How much is tuition for the universities in Finland?
              David Publishing published it in 2013, which makes it very current and credible. The graphs are done well and do not show preference to any of the countries. At the bottom of the page, it says it was presented at an Education and Society conference in Istanbul. Over all a very well written comparative essay.
            I plan on using this in my paper purely for facts. The facts used in this comparative essay are very valuable when I look only at Finland. I will use this essay mainly in the beginning when I write about the basics about the two systems.  

            Finland: Higher Education. Paris: Organisation for Economic Co-operation and Development, 1995. Print.

This book explains in depth, the structure of the Finnish educational system from start to end. It explains the history in the first chapter and then goes into the actual structure in the second. The chapters after that are in depth explanations of each part of Finnish education. Along with text, the book has graphs with demographics and time to show how far the country has come with its various reforms. The book shows the positives and negatives of the various reforms and other actions in the history until today.
The source is credible because of the lengths it’s gone to provide the information given. The book was written by OECD for the series Reviews of National Policies for Education. Each graph is given by the Finnish Ministry of Education, and is sourced at the bottom of each graph (which is just about every other page). The book shows no prejudice throughout the book. It only gives facts about the history and the reforms given throughout the history that made it rise to the top. The only part, which is not credible, is when the book was written. It was written in 1995, and a lot of things have changed since then. It still gives a good view of the system though.
I plan on using this book as one of my main sources because of the abundance of information given and the quality of the information. The book is well written and easy to read and skim through for the valuable information. I will use this book for just about every aspect of my paper. It has things about teachers, about budget, about government, pretty much anything I need to know about the Finnish education system in in the book.
“The traditional long-term objectives of Finnish education policy are to raise the general standard of education and to provide educational equality.” (29)
“According to the plan proposed by the government in summer 1993, the education system should be developed in the direction of greater clarity and international compatibility.” (32)
“Both comprehensive and upper secondary school have a broadly based system of counseling that underpins the development of the pupil, and provides guidance in studying, career planning and choice of further studies.” (30)   

            "Race to the Top." The White House. The White House, 31 Mar. 2013. Web. 31 Mar. 2013. Web.
The web article is a brief explanation about the “Race to the Top” program implemented in the American Recovery and Reinvestment Act created by the Obama administration in 2009 in response to the No Child Left Behind Act created in the previous presidency by the Bush administration. The program is mainly about budgets and testing more than anything.  It plans to give $4 billion to 19 states in funding. It will try to turn around the lowest-performing schools.
This is a reliable source because it comes from a government website. It could be determined that the source is biased because it came from the White House and it is describing policies made by the White House. The article is mostly facts so it doesn’t really need to be biased in the first place.
To get a better understanding of the program I think I will need another source about it. I will use this to show what we are doing now and in the future and compare it to how Finland is reforming today and their outlooks for the future. I can use this for my section about government interference within education. I can also use this in my section about budget and testing too.
“This initiative offers bold incentives to the states willing to spur systemic reform to improve teaching and learning in American’s school.”
“Race to the Top has helped drive the states nationwide to pursue higher standards, improve teacher effectives, use data effectively in the classroom, and adopt new strategies to help struggling schools.”
“Obama’s Race to the Top initiative has dedicated over $4 billion to 19 states that have created robust plans that address the four key areas of K-12 education reform.”  


Workshop Reflection: Annotated Bibliography


      1. What advice did you receive from each member of your group?  Explain each person’s advice separately and be specific?
   
      Everyone was equally helpful. They all pointed out that I needed to restructure my paper because I wrote the paper before I was given specific instructions, and clumped everything together as I annotated the sources. They did point out that I had almost all of the points though. They also pointed out that I needed to add a credibility part and on the last two sources I need to add a part about how I am going to use the source in my paper. Another part of my paper that was different was the quotes. Instead of listing the quotes at the bottom, I put them inside the text. I definitely had 3 quotes and sometimes more though.   
   
      2. What was the most helpful piece of advice you received? Explain.
   
      The most helpful was to add the credibility section. I had forgotten all about that from the classes before.
   
      3. What was the least helpful piece of advice you received?  Explain.

I think the least helpful was the part about restructuring. I already knew I needed to do that after Monday's class.

4. What are your plans for revision?  Be specific.  I should be able to understand exactly how your work will change in exactly which places.


I will add the two points mentioned above and I will attempt to restructure the paper (if possible). My second 2 will definitely be different.

Self-Asessment Reflection: Annotated Bibliography

1. What were your goals for yourself in writing this paper?  To what extent did you reach your goals?

I wrote the paper before I knew exactly what to do because of Megan's sick day I did not under stand the email so my paper looks a little different then everyone else's. Everything is a little more jumbled together.

2. How did you use your time in developing this paper?  Did you use class opportunities to improve your writing?  Explain.  How did your use of time fit your goals?

I wrote all of it on sunday night, since I thought it was due on monday. I would have used Wednsday's class to write the majority though.

3. How did you see your writing changing?  Did you take advantage of the responses from your peers?  Explain how you worked with your peers?

I will definitely use my peers responses to enhance my paper. I will use their insight to form the paper better and I will add a few things to it. 

4. Who else contributed to your paper’s success?  Explain their role?

Tony gave me some recommendations on sources since he switched topics.   

5. What have you learned about yourself as a writer? What did you learn from others?

I have learned to read my teachers emails more carefully so then I would have known that the paper was not due until Wednesday.

6. What was the hardest part of writing this paper?  Explain.  What was the easiest part? Explain.  Where did you take risks?  Explain.

I think the hardest part was filtering out the sources. Their were some sources that I thought I could use but then trashed. The easiest part was having done this same assignment in high school, which helped me understand it better.

7.What parts of your paper are you proudest of?  Why?

I am proud of my first source because I think it was the most relevant which made it easier to write about.

8. What parts of your paper still need improvement?  Why?  How did you attempt to make these improvements before you turned the paper in?

I need to reorganize and I need to add a part about why the paper is credible and where I will use my sources in my paper.

9. Explain your writing process from brainstorming to now.


My writing process had been based on the sources I find. I found it easier to go through one source at a time rather then finding them all at once.

Sunday, March 24, 2013

Annotated Bibliography 1st Draft


Randolph, Kelli, and Dylinda Wilson-Younger. "Is No Child Left Behind Effective For All Students?" Parents Don't Think So." Online Submission (2012): ERIC. Web. 24 Mar. 2013.

            In this article, the authors describe the pros and cons to the No Child Left Behind Act implemented by the Bush Administration in 2001. I plan on using the information to show government intervention in education in America, and then compare it to Finland. The first fact the article gives is how the “NCLB requires any schools receiving any types of federal funding to administer some type of standardized test to their students every year” (Randolph 1). The purpose of this is to measure the success of the students and the school as a whole, and to make sure the schools are staying on task by meeting the requirements set by the state. The hope of this program was is to have all students scoring proficiently by the 2013 – 2014 year. A question I have about this is, how close are we to reaching this goal? Have we made any progress at all with this program? If the schools don’t meet the AYP (adequate yearly progress) two years in a row they are labeled “in need of improvement.” When this happens they are provided technical assistance, parents may choose to send their students to a new school and the school must come up for a plan for improvement over the next two years. If it declines for three years, the school must provide free tutoring and education services to the students. How hard are these goals, and how do they vary from state to state? How often does a school need this?
“The NCLB has been praised, but mostly criticized. Many parents have praised the NCLB, because it allowed them to get their children out of failing schools and move them to better ones” (Randolph 2).  The NCLB Act has also provided resources such as computers to the classroom and improved test scores in multiple schools. What is the technology in the classrooms like in Finland? The bad parts of the NCLB Act include schools arguing that the goals set forth by the states are unattainable and the proper funding is not available either. “In an effort to improve test scores, many states have cut out their arts programs and in some cases have cut “nonessential” subjects such as social studies, foreign language, health, and science” (Randolph 3). How many of these classes does Finland provide? “President Obama along with the Secretary of Education also initiated “Race to the Top” as a part of the American Recovery and Reinvestment Act” (Randolph 4). The article did not talk much about this, but it could be something I can use in my paper as a future outlook in America.      




Sahlberg, Pasi. "Lessons From Finland: Where The Country's Education System Rose To The Top In Just A Couple Decades." Education Digest: Essential Readings Condensed For Quick Review 77.3 (2011): 18-24. ERIC. Web. 24 Mar. 2013.

This article from the Education Digest is about the Finnish educational system. It gives most of the success to the teachers and the process they have to go through to be teachers, but there are other factors mentioned as well. “Today, three of five young Finns enroll in and 50% complete state-funded higher education after upper secondary school” (Pasi 1). How does this compare to the U.S.? One interesting thing stated throughout the article was how the Finnish system does not employ external standardized testing to drive the performance of schools or to inspect the schools and teachers. This is the opposite of how the American system works. The Finns devote lots of attention to personalized learning and creativity. “The progress of each student is judged more against his or her individual development are seen as a responsibility of the school, not external assessors” (Pasi 8). This is also the opposite of America. The Finland system uses personal judgment rather than statistical indicators.
“Teaching is consistently the most admired profession in opinion polls of high school graduates” (Pasi 2). Teaching is a hard profession to pursue though, suggests the article; “5,000 prospective teachers are selected from about 20,000 applicants” (Pasi 2). After the selection process, the hard part still has yet to come. “All teachers in Finnish primary, middle and high schools must hold a masters degree; preschool and kindergarten teachers must hold a bachelor’s degree” (Pasi 3). These are very high expectations to hold, and are not matched by most American teachers. It takes five to seven years for a teacher to complete their master’s degree. Once the teacher obtains their degree and position, it is usually a life time job; “an official estimate suggests that only 10% - 15% of teachers leave the profession during the course of their career” (Pasi 6). How does this compare to the U.S. expectancy of a teacher’s time in their position?     


Gokce, Asiye Toker, and Cevat Celep. "A Comparison Of Educational Systems Of Turkey, Malta, Ireland, Spain, Sweden, Portugal, Finland, Greece, Belgium, The Netherlands And Denmark." Online Submission (2011): ERIC. Web. 24 Mar. 2013.
           
This article compares the differences between Finland and other European countries. It gives a better understanding of the Finnish system from beginning to end in respect to economic, social and educational boundaries. In Finland, 57% for primary and secondary education is from the government while 43% is from municipalities. What is the rate in America? In Finland students enter compulsory education at the age of seven. When they enter compulsory education the goal is to “teach children to carry a sense of responsibility, independence, creativity, peaceful relations with people and be compatible with Finnish society, and to set a good relationship between school and parents” (Asiye Toker 6). Another interesting fact pointed out about Finland is how close enrolment in private school is to public school. It is about 60% enrolment for public school and 40% for private school according to the graph on page 7. How similar are private and public schools in Finland?  “Once graduating the students will have a chance for registering to any school they want. Passing a skill exam is necessary for some vocational schools entrance” (Asiye Toker 8). 
            The starting and completing age for Finland is 16 and 19 for upper secondary education according to the graph on page 8. This is older than the U.S. system. “While universities highlight scientific research and instruction, technical schools emphasize “practice” in their strategic plans in Finland” (Asiye Toker 10). This seems similar to the U.S. The main focus of the Finnish university system is to provide conditions for free and autonomous studying. How hard are these schools to get into though? What is the application process like for universities in Finland? How much is tuition for the universities in Finland?