In your Writing History Response, you have more fully described how your experiences have affected you as a writer and what you believe about writing. In the future, pay attention to the formality of your papers.
In your Exploratory Essay, you have made clearer your connections to the solutions for education and added more questions.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you clarified some of your analysis. Some of your analysis is still vague and the first annotation is still confusing.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you have clarified sentences by revising or deleting information.
Dear Joey,
ReplyDeleteIn your Writing History Response, you have more fully described how your experiences have affected you as a writer and what you believe about writing. In the future, pay attention to the formality of your papers.
In your Exploratory Essay, you have made clearer your connections to the solutions for education and added more questions.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you clarified some of your analysis. Some of your analysis is still vague and the first annotation is still confusing.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you have clarified sentences by revising or deleting information.
Megan