What was a helpful piece of advice you received? Explain
I found out in my paper that a focused more on the cause, not the effect of things. I did not go into much detail on how all of it shaped me into the writer I am today as I should have. I need to show what I believe in the subject of writing and how I got to the point I am at today.
What was the least helpful advice you received? Explain
I think if I expanded on every comment made about my paper I would have about a 4 or 5 page paper. The question that kept popping up was "What does this suggest you believe about writing?" I'm still not completely sure what this means, but I am guessing it means to expand on my thoughts.
What questions do you have about Megan's comments?
I have questions on how to expand on some of the thoughts in my paper. Like in comment [MF 13] it is basically telling me to add another paragraph. I don't know what else to write about. I have never really thought about my writing timeline ever before, but it is an interesting topic. I will probably see Megan in person for some of these questions.
What are your plans for revision?
The first thing I will do is put my name on my paper and change the format to MLA specifications. Next I will expand on all the comments "What does this suggest you believe about writing?". I will also explain more the effect and how, not just the cause and what. I will completely delete my 2nd to last paragraph, as it has nothing to do with my past writing history. I will also make some of the aspects of the paper easier to read and understand instead of expecting the reader to know everything about my life and add the connections together.
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